| When rock stars write, pens and keyboards hide; not | | | | so acute/ that dreams could/ produce blood/ a |
| in Patti Smith's case, however. Patti Smith is a poet | | | | thorny path/ littered with wings. |
| through and through, and I believe she is more of a | | | | Our Jargon Muffles the Drum is another work of |
| poet than a musician. Her poetry is both concrete | | | | prose, a stream of consciousness piece that leaves |
| and abstract, yet powerful, lyrical, and poignant, and | | | | the reader breathless through three plus pages; yet, |
| she can draw word pictures that come alive. | | | | the words carry the sound and meaning with music |
| This volume of poetry contains twenty-six poems | | | | and a sense of relatedness. |
| with a quotation from William Blake, as if it were an | | | | The Writer's Song is the last poem in the book. it is |
| introduction. The title of the book is also a quote | | | | better to write/ than die is a reminder that writers |
| from Blake. | | | | are alive and related in living and that life and writing |
| The book opens with an introspective poem, The | | | | bleed into each other. |
| Lovecrafter. I felt most any poet could relate to | | | | Patricia Lee Smith or Patti Smith was born in 1946. |
| what is expressed in it. The Long Road spoke to me, | | | | She is a poet, musician, artist, and songwriter. With |
| but then Smith's poetry is powerful and it is | | | | her 1975 album Horses, she gained fame for being |
| impossible not to identify with lines like "We broke | | | | the main influence on punk rock. She was inducted to |
| our mother's heart and became ourselves./ We | | | | the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame on March 12, 2007. |
| proceeded to breathe and therefore to leave, | | | | She maintains that poets Blake, Stevenson and |
| drunken, astonished, each of us a god. | | | | Rimbaud have influenced her poetry. Her published |
| In The Pythagorean Traveler, can be felt something | | | | works are: Seventh Heaven, A Useless Death, |
| universally potent that seeps from the divine to the | | | | Verlaine, Kodak, The Coral Sea, Babel, Early Morning |
| individual. The prose poem Written by a Lake is | | | | Dream, The Night, Ha! Ha! Houdini!, Notes for the |
| words making music while coming alive. The meaning | | | | Future, Woolgathering, Wild Leaves, Patti Smith |
| skips between the tangible and the intangible without | | | | Complete, Strange Messenger. Selected Letters of |
| losing the wholeness of the piece. | | | | Gregory Corso, and Auguries of Innocence. |
| Birds of Iraq might have some political needling built | | | | Auguries of Innocence is more than a major |
| into it; even so, it may be preferable to look at it on | | | | accomplishment; it is collection of poems that are |
| a wider human scale, at a country torn apart, | | | | insightful, fiery, affecting, and distressing. Patti Smith's |
| violence smeared all over with gusto, and the sense | | | | poetry imposes upon the reader her intimate vision |
| of loss permeating beyond the loss of human bodies. | | | | of the world, but then, moving the reader from the |
| Still, the poem is a protest against those who commit | | | | depths of sorrow to empathy and insight is what a |
| human rights violations. And never again/ will vision be | | | | true poet does. |